I'm Andy,I'm a boy,I'm 8,I'm tall,I'm fit,I can swim.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-9-29 21:16 编辑 ].

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Thank you!

I think he should use Andy learns English as title, but he likes the word study.

That's OK.

And  I am not sure if fit is suitable or not here.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-2 18:22 编辑 ].

这是他自己写的文章吗？好有才

不过妈妈也很有才，居然用英文来写帖子。

我实在应付不了.

A very good boy! Going on!.

Thank you very much for your kindly encourage!.

You are welcome! Waiting for more!.

My Daddy is thin, my Mommy is fat, but I'm strong and fit.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-4 11:13 编辑 ].

Your son makes me laugh..

This morning, I watch TV with my Mom and Dad at home.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-4 11:14 编辑 ].

  He said Mom need more excerise!.

I have a younger sister, she is fat, but she is very cute.              ,

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-1 20:27 编辑 ].

The lazy boy thinks words Mummy and Daddy are too long, so he use Mum and Dad instead of Mommy and Daddy!

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-2 11:26 编辑 ].

how old are u?.

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原帖由 mikishen 于 2009-10-2 05:32 发表
how old are u?

8, Pls see 1st floor.

His English is soso, just for fun and practice..

先让他知道大小写和标点符号。Mum Dad要大写。I have a younger sister后面要句号句掉， My Dad is thin也要句号。英文的习惯和中文不同，没有那么多逗号的。
还有，说妈妈，妹妹fat是不礼貌的，有贬义的意思。
继续努力.

[ 本帖最后由 不二周助 于 2009-10-2 08:49 编辑 ].

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-2 08:48 发表
先让他知道大小写和标点符号。Mum Dad要大写。I have a younger sister后面要句号句掉， My Dad is thin也要句号。英文的习惯和中文不同，没有那么多逗号的。
还有，说妈妈，妹妹fat是不礼貌的，有贬义的意思。
继 ...

Thank you very much!

Welcome more comments!

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-2 11:28 编辑 ].

study  的语法是否要注意单数的用法啊？  同样  The lazy boy  thinks  instead of think.

[ 本帖最后由 MARK妈眯 于 2009-10-2 11:24 编辑 ].

Agree! Thank you!

Welcome more comments!.

Today, I go to Oriental Green Boat with my Mum and Dad..

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-9-29 21:10 发表
Thank you!

I think he should use Andy learns English as title, but he likes the word study.

That's OK.

And  I am not sure if fit is suitable or not in here.

in here.

呵呵， 刚刚学， 估计只知道fat，没有更多的词汇啦。.

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原帖由 龚二 于 2009-10-2 12:36 发表




in here

My Chinglish!

Welcome more comments! .

Today, I'm very tired. The Oriental Green Boat is very big.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-2 20:39 编辑 ].

This is a good hotel, the room is nice.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-3 09:41 编辑 ].

建议多阅读，将来写作词汇就丰富了，也能摆脱中式英语的思维。
先把and, so, but, because串起来写一段。
I went to the Oriental Green Boat with Mum and Dad today. It was a great fun but I was very tired at the end. So I came back to the hotel to rest. I love this hotel because the room is very nice..

I am a boy named Andy. I am tall and fit because I like swimming. But my mum and sister don't do sports so they are not as stronge as me..

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-3 20:52 发表
建议多阅读，将来写作词汇就丰富了，也能摆脱中式英语的思维。
先把and, so, but, because串起来写一段。
I went to the Oriental Green Boat with Mum and Dad today. It was a great fun but I was very tired a ...

Same as Chinese. Reading is very important.

Are there any books recommend to him?.

Today is Sunday, it's sunny!

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-4 11:08 编辑 ].

The Oriental Green Boat is very beautiful, but it is very far.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-4 11:09 编辑 ].

看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-4 19:26 发表
看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。

Thank you very much for your encourage and professional comments! Welcome more!

This also confused me, I saw many sight spots use Oriental Land, but actually he copied Oriental Green Boat from the envelope in the hotel..

Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, 3 for me.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-5 20:35 编辑 ].

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Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-5 20:35 编辑 ].

You are welcome. In fact, I am a layperson. The Oriental Green Boat reminds me the yacht in Huangpu river. It results from the confused official translation. Therefore I like the phrases such as  "jiayou".
Andy, jiayou!.

继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。.

旺旺上牛孩可真多啊，我们现在连话都说不利索啊，你们居然能用英文写了.

Yesterday afternoon, we went to Shanghi S&T Museum.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-5 20:34 编辑 ].

Yesterday afternoon, I bought a windmill for my sister, she was very happy.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-5 20:43 编辑 ].

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表
继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。 ...

Thank you so much for your comments.   I will remind him.  

I do learn a lot here. Thanks again!.

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原帖由 小小来妈妈 于 2009-10-5 17:52 发表
旺旺上牛孩可真多啊，我们现在连话都说不利索啊，你们居然能用英文写了

His English is really soso. Believe me.

This post is just for practice typing..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表
续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。...

He read your suggestions very carefully yesterday, he thinks your suggestions are very reasonable.

Flowers! Catch!.

An apple a day keeps the doctor away..

My favourite fruit is watermelon.
My Mom's favourite fruit is pear.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 09:58 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 09:57 发表
My favourite fruit is watermelon.
My Mom's favourite fruit is pear.

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear..

Mum thinks that pear is better for our health..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 10:15 发表

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear.

Thank you! Your suggestion helps a lot!.

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原帖由 luo妈妈 于 2009-10-6 10:58 发表
Mum thinks that pear is better for our health.

Good point! Thank you! .

Yesterday morning, I went to SJTU. It's big and nice.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 19:45 编辑 ].