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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-14 19:58 发表
I plan to visit  bread factory this Saturday.

taste or test?.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-15 11:03 发表


taste or test?

Taste! That's my fault, all title inputted by me..

This Saturday, 10 classmates will visit  bread factory with me..

I like hamburger,and I like sandwich too.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-16 21:31 编辑 ].

The hamburger we tasted in the bread factory is not hamburger but bread..

Today, we ate crabs at lunch time. It's very delicious..

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Yesterday, Dad and Mom bought a nice bicycle for me. And they bought two pairs of new shoes for my sister too. We all are very happy..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-20 10:04 发表
Yesterday, Dad and Mom bought a nice bicycle for me. And they bought two pairs of new shoes for my sister too. We all are very happy.

I updated this post on behalf of him.

He wrote it in word yesterday evening as our internet got some problem.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-22 09:14 编辑 ].

We bought lots of dumplings today.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-20 21:11 编辑 ].

My Mom have dinner meeting today, and she had lunch meeting yesterday too.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 09:12 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 09:08 发表
My Mom have dinner meeting today, and she had lunch meeting yesterday too.

I updated this post on behalf of him.

He wrote it in word yesterday evening as I went home very late.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-22 09:14 编辑 ].

We are going to autumn trip next  Monday.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 13:45 编辑 ].

autumn trip 比较怪。写school trip 或者 field trip好。.

I will take a picnic mat with me for the coming field trip.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 20:24 编辑 ].

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-22 15:35 发表
autumn trip 比较怪。写school trip 或者 field trip好。

My workmate from US also thinks field trip is better..

Good ideas, and when my son has grown up, to participate in.

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原帖由 fan929 于 2009-10-22 16:54 发表
Good ideas, and when my son has grown up, to participate in

Nice weekend!.

My favorite subject is PE lesson.What's your favorite subject?

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-23 22:22 编辑 ].

I go shopping for field trip.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-24 09:02 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 13:44 发表
We are going to autumn trip next  Monday.

be going to do sth, autumn/field trip中trip是名词。
We are going to trip next Monday.
We are going to have(take, make) a school(field) trip next Monday.
We are going on a school(field) trip next Monday..

I bought some biscuit in the supermarket this morning..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-24 13:07 发表

be going to do sth, autumn/field trip中trip是名词。
We are going to trip next Monday.
We are going to have(take, make) a school(field) trip next Monday.
We are going on a school(field) trip next  ...

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Almost one month already!.

I visited Navy History Museum this morning..

We went to field trip, I saw many ostriches.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-26 19:11 编辑 ].

My Mom picks up me today. I'm very very happy. I hope my Mom can pick up me every day.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-27 16:49 发表
My Mom picked up me today. I'm very very happy. I hope my Mom can pick up me every day.

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My sister can sing a song. It's little star..

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原帖由 香格里拉的春天 于 2009-10-24 21:45 发表
Almost one month already!

One month finally!.

I played with my classmate Amy and her 4 friends at downstairs just now.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-29 18:03 编辑 ].

Mom bought two new books for me, I love them..

We ate out this morning. We ate shrimp this noon. We will eat fish this evening..

Today is Halloween. I played pumpkin game. It's very funny..

We ate dumplings this morning. We ate noodles this noon. And we will eat rice this evening.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-1 19:06 编辑 ].

I have breakfast at home. I have lunch at school.And I have dinner at grammy's home..

It's very cold today. It's November already. Goodbye October!

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-3 16:13 编辑 ].

My English is very poor!

Welcome more friends help us, correct our mistakes!

Thank you in advance! .

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there.  And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

Thank you so much!

My 2-year-old daughter enjoys the songs for little kids there. When a song is over, she pushes the replay button by herself, again and again!

Her brother likes many songs also.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-11-4 12:31 编辑 ].

Our blackboard is rectangle. It has four corners.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-4 19:06 编辑 ].

I was hit by one of my classmates and fell down in the classroom this afternoon.

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-8 15:27 编辑 ].

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-5 13:46 发表
This afternoon, one of my classmates hitted me carelessly, and I fell down in our classroom.

This is better! Thank you! Wini mommy
One of my classmates hit me carelessly and I fell down in the classroom this afternoon..

carelessly 不对的，我知道你的意思，但是外国人看不懂的。改成by accident 或者 accidentally.

I was hit by one of my classmates and fell down in the classroom this afternoon.
But maybe Andy doesn't understand the passive pattern..

不二周助说得对的。开始没注意。carelessly 更多是指粗心的那种不当心。.

一直在看这个贴，真的写得原来越好了！.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-11-6 08:59 发表
carelessly 不对的，我知道你的意思，但是外国人看不懂的。改成by accident 或者 accidentally

Thank you so much!

Welcome more comments!.

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原帖由 Wini妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:03 发表
I was hit by one of my classmates and fell down in the classroom this afternoon.
But maybe Andy doesn't understand the passive pattern.

Great!.

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原帖由 Wini妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:09 发表
不二周助说得对的。开始没注意。carelessly 更多是指粗心的那种不当心。

I am so happy that so many kind friends help us!

I do appreciate all of you!.

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原帖由 小车子妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:36 发表
一直在看这个贴，真的写得原来越好了！

Thank you for your encourage!

Let's together!.