1楼0常春藤学社 (点击这里放飞你的心情) 发表于 2013-1-24 22:45  只看此人 短信 关注 忽略  备注 Ivy万体馆2017暑假课程安排： 1.小升初语法：7月3日-7月26日（15classes）（8：00-10：00）(周一至周四) 2. 中考语法：  7月3日-7月28日 （12classes）（13：00-16：00））（周一、周三、周五） 3.中考阅读写作：7月31日-8月25日（12classes）(13：00-16：00）（周一、周三、周五） 4.高考英语： （8：30-11：30）每周五+周日 学习要求：有一定的背诵和练习量，希望能够留出足够时间预习和复习，背诵。如果三次验收不合格将劝退。 备注：为了保证教学质量，参加课程前会对孩子们进行水平测试，每位学生在课程开课前都需要试听一节课并完成一份笔试试卷 其他英语常规班： 1.新概念2：每周三、周五 (18：30-20：30) 进度 Lesson10 2.新概念1：每周六上午   (8：00-10：00） 进度：Lesson1 3.新概念1：每周六上午  (10：00-12：00）进度：Lesson50 4.新概念3+中考英语：每周二、周六  （12:30-15:00）新班 5.新概念3+高考英语： 每周二、周六 （15：30-18：30）进度：Lesson40 6.新概念2：每周二、周六（19：00-21：00）进度：Lesson58 7.新概念3+中考英语：每周四、周日 （13：00-15：30）进度：Lesson10 8.新概念2：每周四、周日 （16：00-18：30）进度：Lesson70 上课地点：徐汇区万体馆 （零陵路） 电话：13661866385  微信号：13661866386  邮箱：Ivy_zhaonan@qq.com 备注：各班都有个性化定制的教学风格和教学目标，同一进度，不同班级，上课模式也会有偏差， 具体课程详情，请和我联系，我会根据孩子的水平进行测试，推荐合适的班级。

关于新概念二课程：大家都知道新概念课程是英语学习的“经典中的经典”，这本教材螺旋上升的将英语学习中出现的语法现象安排在文章中。很多时态在第一单元都已经浮出水面，但层层加深的理念在后续章节中再次出现，让孩子感觉到是个挑战，但又可以克服。完全避免了填鸭式教育，让孩子们来不及消化和理解；且文章难度的循序渐进，也提升了了写作中句式的应用：句子—并列句—复合句-多重复合句；也逐一通过单词、短语、从句等体现句子成分的修饰。不仅覆盖了所有中考难点；翻译，写作也在不知不觉中进步。

新概念三课程安排及介绍：课程内容：课文精讲+（听、读、语法、写作）专项之一精练。

关于新概念三课程：

1. 词汇与语法：更进一步扩充、讲解词汇、短语及语法的实战运用。

2、句型：60篇各类美文循序渐进讲习；200余个经典句型纵向梳理、复合仿写；

3、阅读：8000单词的大容量阅读训练、 语言逻辑逐步培养。

4、写作：1300个精练词组、12种写作模式、从实用与可模仿性的角度分析句子及句子间的逻辑关系，让大家认识到句型的精炼、优美、实用与可模仿性，从而将其有机地运用于英语写作应试当中。

常春藤学社社长介绍：

坚守并见证了让学习英语成为孩子乐趣的十年中，我也慢慢成长为让家长信任、孩子喜欢的老师、朋友。
在所任教的学校中（乐宁/EF/昂立/学而思），因为自己独特的教学风格，和教学理念，成为学校中最优秀的英语教师之一，并担任学校课程内训培训师的工作。我以标准的美式发音、活泼灵动的授课方式成为英语教学中的清新实力派。

以往在青少年英语教学领域的教学经历：

长期班课程：

吉的堡（1-14册）教程

小雅思（1-4册）教程

新概念（1-4册）教程

短期班课程：

星级考口试：三、四星（高通过率）

星级考笔试：二、三星（高通过率）

3E考试

小升初语法梳理课程

小升初阅读写作课程

初中中考语法梳理课程

初中写作阅读课程

高中语法梳理课程

高中阅读写作课程

以及多位一对一教学经历

成人英语教学经历：

昂立国际英语资深中教（成人部）

乐宁剑桥国际口语（成人部）

这些经历和经验使我能够将以上经典教材融会贯通并转化为宝贵的养分注入到我的课堂中。

教学中的心理学：
我总是让爱充满着我的课堂，我会让学生感到我的关爱和鼓励，这种爱的力量，可以使得孩子们紧张焦虑的情绪一扫而光，关注力和注意力大为提高，考试中出现的点点滴滴细节，自然也就不会错过。同时这种爱的课堂，让每个学生的内心得到舒展、释放，大多数学生上过我的几节课后，都会积极的参与回答问题，有些学生甚至会用英语表达他们的思想，这不是学习语言初衷吗（拒绝哑巴英语）！

报班说明
1.每个小班，人数都定在8人.根据每个学生的测试结果进行分班，依据每个班的平均水平设置具体的课程进度、教案、教学方法等。
2.缺课不设退费，如果有同程度的班级可去补课，或者单独辅导，但是辅导时间要另定，补内容不补课时。
3.家长可以随时旁听我的每节课，但因为多数上课的孩子处于青少年阶段，有着自己独立的想法，会有希望被父母理解又有不被父母看穿的情绪。爸爸妈妈在的话，部分学生会被影响到，这种情况，为了孩子更好的学习，我建议可以让孩子自己上课，如果想回家辅导和复习的家长，可给孩子带上录音笔，回家再进行整理和复习。
4.报名时请将孩子姓名，性别，就读中学，年级，联系方式，以上内容可旺旺上短给我，或发电子邮件。ivy_zhaonan@qq.com
电话及微信号：13661866385


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地铁一号线、四号线（上海体育馆站）：1号口从非洲国际南门出来步行5分钟。
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公交：
零陵路上上海体育馆站(非洲国际一侧)56、89、122、703/703B、218、236、111、927、167
零陵路上上海体育馆站（万体馆一侧）808（始发站）、89、824、957、92/92B(终到站)、857、218、236、111、927、167
零陵路斜土路:15路（始发站）
漕溪北路裕德路站：电信营业厅门口停靠43、946、770、957、820、122、927、徐闵线、遂二、申闵线、984、985、汇翠花园门口停靠42、926、931、712、56、50、824、观光一路
漕溪北路蒲汇塘路：影业街停靠 703、703B（始发站）

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飞洲国际、星游城、腾飞大厦让爱逛街的妈妈们小入几件心头好。
万体馆、星游城美食广场及各种美食店遍布周边，满足安全美味便捷的就餐需求。
也可在整洁宽敞的客厅上网、与其他家长交流经验、喝喝茶、发发呆。。。

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近期还会有更多英语学习资料，大家多多关注啊：）.

新概念二第四单元
每周五晚：6:00-8:30 剩余名额两人
每周日下午：16:30-19:00 剩余名额一人
（P.S 如果之前因为某种原因没有读完新二第四单元的同学，这两个班是不错的选择，新二的第四单元基础性的把初中语法都会复习到，同时，又加强了写作的练习。
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初一、初二同义句期末复习（2）.rar (3.24 KB)

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2012-12-14 20:34

请同学们花点时间来复习吧，接下来我会发点题目给大家测试哒~~：）Fighting~~~.

请问有新概念下册开始读的班吗？我们初一.

第四单元是从第几课开始.我们想从49课开始,有这个班吗.

家长您好 目前周六下午的班适合你们来读，时间是1:00-3:30，班里现在剩一个名额，班里部分孩子是预初和初一的学生，但基础一般，所以上课内容为巩固加提高，覆盖中考内容和学校考试，不知道你们家的孩子基础如何，你可以带孩子来我这里试听一下或者我发给孩子一套题做做，我测试一下.

发套题目我们做做看吧.

请将您的邮箱发给我.

己发好了.

老师，您好，请问基口寒假有班吗?.

家长您好，暂时没有.

题目已经发到您的邮箱了：）.

题目已经发到您的邮箱了.

家长您好，请孩子在周五前做完，这样我可以及时回复。）因为，周末都在上课.

同义句转换是初中学生最容易失分的基础题，因为是填空，因此需要有大量的练习，才可以做对，相比选项的选择题难很多，所以大家要多多练习啊：）.

1People everywhere sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
People ______ and _______sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
2Fred was visiting his mother on her 95th birthday.
Fred was visiting his mother _______ she was ______ years old.
3She lives alone.
She lives ________ __________.
4 Due to the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
________ ________ the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
5 But it took her a long time to find out.
But she ______ a long time _______ out.
6 Ten years later, Tom became a strong boy and became a good swimmer, too.
Ten years later, Tom became _______a strong boy ________ a good swimmer.
7 Shy people are also good at working with others because they think more for other people.
She people also ________ ______ in working with others because they think more for other people.
8 Mark decided to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
Mark _______ a ________ to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
9 Once there was something wrong with a machine in a factory.
Once a machine in a factory ________ __________.
10 When parents have poor eating habits, their children usually do, too.
When parents have poor eating habits, _______ ________ their children.
11 In the computer game houses, it takes people a lot of money competing with the machines.
People _____ ______ money in competing with the machines in the computer games houses.
12 When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from around the country joined them.
When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from ________ _______ the country joined them.
13 When he first reached the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
When he first _________ _______ the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
14 Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help take care of people’s teeth.
Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help ________ ________ people’s teeth.
15 He was different from other children.
He was _______ the ______ as other children.
16 Bob is twice as old as Jack, so he is now thirty.
Jack is _______ years ________ than Bob.
17 I teach something to air hostesses.
Air hostesses ________ something _______ me.
18 The world is full of variety.
The world is ________ _________ variety.
19 To his surprise, the taste was nice.
He was ______ ______ the taste was nice.
20 Once in the area, a car s almost a must.
You _______ ______ take a car in the area..

准备明天晚上做，做完就发给你。平时学校作业太多直在没有时间。谢谢了.

谢谢老师了，我们家就是同义词转换不行。上面的练习有答案吗。.

同义句答案会在题目发布后两天公布答案：）.

1People everywhere sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
People ___here___ and _there______sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
2Fred was visiting his mother on her 95th birthday.
Fred was visiting his mother ___when____ she was ___9___ years old.
3She lives alone.
She lives ___by_____ ___herself_______.
4 Due to the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
_Because_______ ___of_____ the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
5 But it took her a long time to find out.
But she ___spent___ a long time ___going____ out.
6 Ten years later, Tom became a strong boy and became a good swimmer, too.
Ten years later, Tom became __both_____a strong boy _and_______ a good swimmer.
7 Shy people are also good at working with others because they think more for other people.
Shy people also __do______ ___well___ in working with others because they think more for other people.
8 Mark decided to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
Mark _made______ a _decision_______ to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
9 Once there was something wrong with a machine in a factory.
Once a machine in a factory ___went_____ __wrong________.
10 When parents have poor eating habits, their children usually do, too.
When parents have poor eating habits, __so_____ ___do_____ their children.
11 In the computer game houses, it takes people a lot of money competing with the machines.
People _spend____ much______ money in competing with the machines in the computer games houses.
12 When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from around the country joined them.
When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from ___all_____ __over_____ the country joined them.
13 When he first reached the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
When he first ___got______ ___to____ the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
14 Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help take care of people’s teeth.
Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help ____look____ ___after_____ people’s teeth.
15 He was different from other children.
He was ___not____ the _same_____ as other children.
16 Bob is twice as old as Jack, so he is now thirty.
Jack is __fifteen_____ years ____younger____ than Bob.
17 I teach something to air hostesses.
Air hostesses ___learns_____ something __from_____ me.
18 The world is full of variety.
The world is __filled______ __with_______ variety.
19 To his surprise, the taste was nice.
He was _surprised_____ ___at___ the taste was nice.
20 Once in the area, a car s almost a must.
You ___have____ _to_____ take a car in the area.
亲爱的同学们，期末考试即将来临，这里是同义句复习答案，复习方法，可以将句子背过，一天被3-5组句子，这样可以更好的看到同义句转换在句子中的运用~~加油.

1People everywhere sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
People ___here___ and _there______sat and laughed at them until the tears ran down their faces.
2Fred was visiting his mother on her 95th birthday.
Fred was visiting his mother ___when____ she was ___9___ years old.
3She lives alone.
She lives ___by_____ ___herself_______.
4 Due to the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
_Because_______ ___of_____ the way they eat, they have a high rate of cancer and heart disease.
5 But it took her a long time to find out.
But she ___spent___ a long time ___going____ out.
6 Ten years later, Tom became a strong boy and became a good swimmer, too.
Ten years later, Tom became __both_____a strong boy _and_______ a good swimmer.
7 Shy people are also good at working with others because they think more for other people.
Shy people also __do______ ___well___ in working with others because they think more for other people.
8 Mark decided to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
Mark _made______ a _decision_______ to go sailing in his boat with his friend Dan.
9 Once there was something wrong with a machine in a factory.
Once a machine in a factory ___went_____ __wrong________.
10 When parents have poor eating habits, their children usually do, too.
When parents have poor eating habits, __so_____ ___do_____ their children.
11 In the computer game houses, it takes people a lot of money competing with the machines.
People _spend____ much______ money in competing with the machines in the computer games houses.
12 When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from around the country joined them.
When the local police began to look for the pigs, newspaper reporters from ___all_____ __over_____ the country joined them.
13 When he first reached the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
When he first ___got______ ___to____ the island, he didn’t know what he could find in this strange place.
14 Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help take care of people’s teeth.
Some dentists say that chewing sugarless gum can help ____look____ ___after_____ people’s teeth.
15 He was different from other children.
He was ___not____ the _same_____ as other children.
16 Bob is twice as old as Jack, so he is now thirty.
Jack is __fifteen_____ years ____younger____ than Bob.
17 I teach something to air hostesses.
Air hostesses ___learns_____ something __from_____ me.
18 The world is full of variety.
The world is __filled______ __with_______ variety.
19 To his surprise, the taste was nice.
He was _surprised_____ ___at___ the taste was nice.
20 Once in the area, a car is almost a must.
You ___have____ _to_____ take a car in the area.
亲爱的同学们，期末考试即将来临，这里是同义句复习答案，复习方法，可以将句子背过，一天被3-5组句子，这样可以更好的看到同义句转换在句子中的运用~~加油.

21 But when you are joined to the Internet, there are many things you can do.
But when you are joined to the Internet, there are _________ _______ things you can do.
22 Beijing will be rainy.
There will be _______ ________ Beijing.
23 Mrs Smith and her friends worked hard and the idea was interesting to more and more people over the country.
Mrs Smith and her friends worked hard and more and more people over the country became ___________ _______ the idea.
24 But now there is a Winter Swimming Club and it has over 2,000 members.
But now there is a Winter Swimming Club and it has _________ ________ 2,000 members.
25 Before crossing the road, stop and look both ways.
Before ______ _______ the road, stop and look both ways.
26 We call this mark “watermark”.
This mark ____ ____ “watermark”.
27 They hoped the government would act quickly to conserve nature.
They hoped the government would act quickly _______ _______ to conserve nature.
28 The Komodo lizard is the world’s largest lizard.
The Komodo lizard is larger than ______ _____ lizard in the world.
29 We haven’t done anything to improve the exam system.
We have _______ _______ to improve the exam system.
30 It is much harder to do it with TV or radio advertisements.
It is much ______ ________ to do it with TV or radio advertisements.
31 He was unable to walk any more.
He ______ _______ walked.
32 The bookshelf was too heavy for Miss Green to carry.
The bookshelf was _____ heavy ______ Miss Green didn’t carry it.
33 In order to solve this population problem, China has begun a “one-child’ policy.
China has begun a “one-child” policy ______ ________ it solved this population problem.
34 He scored more goals than anyone else on his team.
He scored _______ _______ goals on his team.
35 He spent very little time at school, perhaps no more than a year in all.
It _______ _______ very little time at school, perhaps no more than a year in all.
36 A school inspector was coming to visit a school.
A school inspector was _____ a visit _____ a school.
37 Why not look at the funny side and laugh instead?
_________ ________ you look at the funny side and laugh instead?
38 Good movies are the ones that you remember and like to see another time.
Good movies are the ones that you remember and like to see ________ than _______.
39 Many public people use web blogs to express their thoughts.
Many public people use web blogs ________ ________ their thoughts.
40 I think maybe it was left on the shelf in the bedroom.
I think it _______ _____ left on the shelf in the bedroom..

21 But when you are joined to the Internet, there are many things you can do.
But when you are joined to the Internet, there are ___lots______ ___of____ things you can do.
22 Beijing will be rainy.
There will be ____much___ __rain______ Beijing.
23 Mrs Smith and her friends worked hard and the idea was interesting to more and more people over the country.
Mrs Smith and her friends worked hard and more and more people over the country became __interested_________ __in_____ the idea.
24 But now there is a Winter Swimming Club and it has over 2,000 members.
But now there is a Winter Swimming Club and it has __more_______ __than______ 2,000 members.
25 Before crossing the road, stop and look both ways.
Before __going____ __across_____ the road, stop and look both ways.
26 We call this mark “watermark”.
This mark __is__ __called__ “watermark”.
27 They hoped the government would act quickly to conserve nature.
They hoped the government would act quickly _in______ __order_____ to conserve nature.
28 The Komodo lizard is the world’s largest lizard.
The Komodo lizard is larger than __any____ _other____ lizard in the world.
29 We haven’t done anything to improve the exam system.
We have __done_____ __nothing_____ to improve the exam system.
30 It is much harder to do it with TV or radio advertisements.
It is much __more____ _difficult_______ to do it with TV or radio advertisements.
31 He was unable to walk any more.
He _no_____ __more_____ walked.
32 The bookshelf was too heavy for Miss Green to carry.
The bookshelf was _so____ heavy _that_____ Miss Green didn’t carry it.
33 In order to solve this population problem, China has begun a “one-child’ policy.
China has begun a “one-child” policy _so_____ __that______ it solved this population problem.
34 He scored more goals than anyone else on his team.
He scored _the______ _most______ goals on his team.
35 He spent very little time at school, perhaps no more than a year in all.
It __took_____ __him_____ very little time at school, perhaps no more than a year in all.
36 A school inspector was coming to visit a school.
A school inspector was __on___ a visit __to___ a school.
37 Why not look at the funny side and laugh instead?
_Why________ __don’t______ you look at the funny side and laugh instead?
38 Good movies are the ones that you remember and like to see another time.
Good movies are the ones that you remember and like to see __more______ than _once______.
39 Many public people use web blogs to express their thoughts.
Many public people use web blogs __for______ __expressing______ their thoughts.
40 I think maybe it was left on the shelf in the bedroom.
I think it __may_____ __be___ left on the shelf in the bedroom..

这里是中考词汇，欢迎大家下载，PDF版本，可以用IPAD看：）.

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期末考试即将来临，再次叮嘱同学们要复习动词形式变化表，并且清楚动词形式是什么概念,
现在进行时/ 过去进行时  动词为  现在分词
一般过去时：动词为    过去式
现在完成时/ 过去完成时 / 被动语态 ： 动词为  过去分词

中学英语常用不规则动词变化表.zip (5.3 KB)

中学英语常用不规则动词变化表.zip (5.3 KB)
下载次数: 85

2013-1-6 17:36

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1月21日-25日早上的时间啊？问题是小朋友还没有放假吧》.

家长您好，

之前的时间打错啦，具体时间我已经改过啦，谢谢您.

家长您好，时间已经更改，谢谢您.

想要参加语法班，先留位.

小囡囡妈妈您好，已经帮您预留（1月28日-2月1日周一至周五，2月4日-2月8日周一至周五，每天上午：9：00-12:00。）的语法班，预留时间到1月15日，稍后请您将孩子的名字和年级及您的联系方式发送到13661866385我的手机上，或在旺旺上短信给我，给孩子预留位置，如果还有其他问题也可以电话联系，谢谢

[ 本帖最后由 常春藤学社 于 2013-1-8 12:21 编辑 ].

现在完成时是初中常考时态，请大家认真复习现在完成时的有关考点。 现在完成时.zip (4.55 KB)

现在完成时.zip (4.55 KB)
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2013-1-10 13:10

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用所给单词的适当形式填空练习.rar (5.37 KB)

用所给单词的适当形式填空练习.rar (5.37 KB)
下载次数: 66

2013-1-12 00:04

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我今天已经付款了，我是第一个啊，刚才看了下，孩子觉得这类题目不太接触啊，我们平时做的不是这样的。.

小囡囡妈妈您好，给大家发的练习题，只是初中英语不同专项题型的综合练习，并不是只指针对初一，所以，个别题目对孩子有点深 但是，不同学校要求不同，有些学校题目会比较难，所以，可以早点复习。
语法班已经满额，其他的家长也会在15日之前进行缴费。.

我家孩子自从上了Ivy老师的长期班后，对英语学习产生了浓厚了兴趣，lvy老师上课生动，知识点梳理的条理清晰，简明易懂，特在此向你表示感谢!马上就要期末考试了，希望所有在你这里学习的孩子们都能取得好成绩!.

Herry妈妈谢谢你，我会继续努力的！新年快乐.

谢谢老师，主要还是要看自己的孩子的！.

我家小女一直跟着IVY老师，从SBS1到现在的新2.　一眨眼工夫，现在已经是初一的学生了．尽管平时西模学校的功课特别多，但是周末新2，小女从没拉过课，因为那里有她喜欢的老师，那里有她喜欢的同学，那里还有一群唧唧喳喳的妈妈们．IVY,我要帮你顶顶帖子！.

女儿也跟随IVY有几年了,每周日上课都要早早的去,IVY老师的课,给孩子带来了学习英语的兴趣和信心,使她在英语的表达上更大胆,孩子和IVY之间的知已知彼,让我们家长非常放心的能把她交给IVY老师,IVY,你为孩子付出的这些,我们家长都感受到了,谢谢你!.

大家在一起是缘分，我珍惜这一切 看着孩子们成长起来，陪他们走了这么久，看着他们一点点长大
自己也很自豪，在他们生命中最为重要的阶段，有我的陪伴

[ 本帖最后由 常春藤学社 于 2013-1-16 10:52 编辑 ].

0d238ea58ed2f7082f68db1e5dc9682d.rar (900.38 KB)

0d238ea58ed2f7082f68db1e5dc9682d.rar (900.38 KB)
下载次数: 64

2013-1-16 10:59

最近看了Life OF Pie这部电影，很感动，回来搜了搜，发现网上有PDF版的英文小说，这里和大家分享一下，懂英文的家长也可以和孩子在闲暇的午后一起读一读.

目前首字母完形班还有两人名额：）.

下周一开学是吗?.

请问新概念1的班还有吗？.

是的，1月28日上午 九点至十二点  （提前十分钟到）.

妍君妈妈您好，目前没有新概念1.

老师还有寒假短期班：初中语法词汇班吗？.

[ 本帖最后由 常春藤学社 于 2014-5-20 11:16 编辑 ].