3楼jane1972_cn
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发表于 2012-5-23 22:16
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Look at my fish.My fish is in the dish.My fish was small when I bring it home.Now it's bigger.I see many scales in his body.I like his scales. My fish is naughty.Sometimes he pretends to be dead.I like my fish's tail.It can swing.When my fish is hungry,I feed it.
这是儿子初次写的,麻烦老师看看。谢谢。.