请教老师，儿子上次写的句子“Sun is shining.It can give us  light and warm.”是否符合母语国家的习惯。
感觉第二句应该改为“It gives us light and warm.”
谢谢。.

谢谢。.

Look at my fish.My fish is in the dish.My fish was small when I bring it home.Now it's bigger.I see many scales in his body.I like his scales. My fish is naughty.Sometimes he pretends to be dead.I like my fish's tail.It can swing.When my fish is hungry,I feed it.
这是儿子初次写的，麻烦老师看看。谢谢。.

谢谢老师，关于dish，其实他是不知道用哪个单词，鱼是放在一个透明的小鱼缸里，我也不知道该用哪个单词表达。.

请老师看看。
This is ipadI.It is our computer.I like our ipad because I can play vidoe game"Pes 2011".When our ipad has no more electricity, we can charge it.I love it..

谢谢老师。.

那是否老师的意思是，先不用急着写作，把基本表达都学会了，再开始英语写作？.

谢谢老师，那您是否建议先把口语、阅读都练习到一定程度，再开始写作。.

谢谢老师如此不耐其烦 地答复。
再次请教，国外孩子不是从小开始写作吗？刚开始写作应该也是口语化的短文吧，他们老师如何批改呢？.

谢谢了，也明白了。.