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我和女儿说英语5
今天都是我在说,女儿状态不好,脑子像浆糊,说得不多。学Persuasion,写作中很重要的一种形式。
我:What is persuasion?
女儿:I don't know.
我:Persuasion is like you say something good so people will be persuaded to your point of view. Then they will buy your products.
女儿:I know. It's an advertisement.
我:Well done. But not only advertisement is a kind of persuasion, think of something else. How about catalogue?
女儿:There are products and price in it.
我:Yes, it also persuades you to buy things. Do you know travel brochure? For example, you read a HK Disneyland brochure. A lot of nice pictures show how fantastic the place is. You're like "Oh, I want to go there to play, it must be great fun." So the purpose of travel brochure is to persuade you to go. Also, have you ever seen a poster? A movie poster?
女儿:Yes.
我:What does a movie poster look like?Why do we have a movie poster?
女儿:It tells you the latest movie. It is big, sometimes shining, people are looking beautiful. So you probably go to the cinema to watch it.
我:Right. Poster is a persuasion as well. Why is it always very big?
女儿:Because it can catch your eyes.
我:Well, we know adverts, catalogue, travel brochure and poster are persuasion. If you were the designer, how would you write your advertisement? How do you sell your products? Firstly, you need to think who is gonna be the audience?
女儿:Customers?
我:Yes. Then you have to grab their attention, gain their trust and convince them you are right. If I say this golden necklace costs two yuan. Would you believe? People might think it is a trick or catch, they don't trust.
女儿:They think it is fake.
我:Probably. Now, you can write a poster of your product. What do you need to write or draw to catch your audience's eyes and persuade them to buy it?
女儿:I would like to sell PSP.
对照一下你说的:“反正我肯定是只抓阅读写作,其他自由发展,我个人不是很在意听力和口语,这很快的。" ----- 不太符合。
我敢肯定你的女儿年纪也不小了,很多记忆你都淡薄了吧?
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