Thank you!

I think he should use Andy learns English as title, but he likes the word study.

That's OK.

And  I am not sure if fit is suitable or not here.

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Thank you very much for your kindly encourage!.

  He said Mom need more excerise!.

The lazy boy thinks words Mummy and Daddy are too long, so he use Mum and Dad instead of Mommy and Daddy!

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原帖由 mikishen 于 2009-10-2 05:32 发表
how old are u?

8, Pls see 1st floor.

His English is soso, just for fun and practice..

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-2 08:48 发表
先让他知道大小写和标点符号。Mum Dad要大写。I have a younger sister后面要句号句掉， My Dad is thin也要句号。英文的习惯和中文不同，没有那么多逗号的。
还有，说妈妈，妹妹fat是不礼貌的，有贬义的意思。
继 ...

Thank you very much!

Welcome more comments!

[ 本帖最后由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-2 11:28 编辑 ].

Agree! Thank you!

Welcome more comments!.

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原帖由 龚二 于 2009-10-2 12:36 发表




in here

My Chinglish!

Welcome more comments! .

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-3 20:52 发表
建议多阅读，将来写作词汇就丰富了，也能摆脱中式英语的思维。
先把and, so, but, because串起来写一段。
I went to the Oriental Green Boat with Mum and Dad today. It was a great fun but I was very tired a ...

Same as Chinese. Reading is very important.

Are there any books recommend to him?.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-4 19:26 发表
看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。

Thank you very much for your encourage and professional comments! Welcome more!

This also confused me, I saw many sight spots use Oriental Land, but actually he copied Oriental Green Boat from the envelope in the hotel..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表
继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。 ...

Thank you so much for your comments.   I will remind him.  

I do learn a lot here. Thanks again!.

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原帖由 小小来妈妈 于 2009-10-5 17:52 发表
旺旺上牛孩可真多啊，我们现在连话都说不利索啊，你们居然能用英文写了

His English is really soso. Believe me.

This post is just for practice typing..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表
续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。...

He read your suggestions very carefully yesterday, he thinks your suggestions are very reasonable.

Flowers! Catch!.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 10:15 发表

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear.

Thank you! Your suggestion helps a lot!.

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原帖由 luo妈妈 于 2009-10-6 10:58 发表
Mum thinks that pear is better for our health.

Good point! Thank you! .

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there.  And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

Great! .

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 20:09 发表

My husband graduated from SJTU in 2001. Would you like to be his schoolfellow in the future?

His Grandma and Grandpa graduated from SJTU too. Currently he has not much idea about university..

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-8 11:33 发表

I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk either.
I like neither mineral water nor bean milk.

I like mineral water. And I like bean milk too.
I like both mineral water and bean mil ...

Thank you so much for correcting  him in time.

either和too都可以当"也"讲,前者用在否定句中,后者用在肯定句中.

Lily likes fruit. I like fruit, too. 莉莉喜欢水果，我也是。
Lily doesn't like fruit. I don't like fruit,either.
莉莉不喜欢水果，我也不喜欢。.

Andy likes this website too. Here is the link:

http://www.starfall.com/.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:49 发表

Who is the best player among your parents and you?

We are all poor at this sports.

(I am not sure if I should express like this. ).

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原帖由 ANDY-MM 于 2009-10-11 15:17 发表

Maybe "visit" is better here.

I did think maybe visit is better here, but his cousin will stay at my home for more than two weeks.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:59 发表

用"come to"替代"come"?

I also confusing on this.

Many years ago, my English teacher told us that no need Prep. before home. Like go home, drive home etc. But I don't know why. Maybe I misremember it.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:51 发表

It is said that you are good at playing go.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-12 20:49 发表

When home is adverb, there is no preposition between verb and home, ie "go home".
My home is noun, and go is intransitive verb, so use "go to my home"?

Thank you very much!

Agree with you!.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-13 12:55 发表
越写越好了。

Thank you so much for your kindly encourage!.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-14 08:07 发表
几年级？

2.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-14 20:36 发表

It will be a wonderful weekend.

He organizes this activity; there will be over 10 classmates join it. It will be a crazy weekend!

He said they are all expecting very much!

And I am his assistant only..

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-15 10:58 发表


这个不叫Yellow kiwi fruit.外国超市里写着 Kiwi Fruit Gold.加油！

Make sense!黄金果 .

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-15 11:03 发表


taste or test?

Taste! That's my fault, all title inputted by me..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-20 10:04 发表
Yesterday, Dad and Mom bought a nice bicycle for me. And they bought two pairs of new shoes for my sister too. We all are very happy.

I updated this post on behalf of him.

He wrote it in word yesterday evening as our internet got some problem.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 09:08 发表
My Mom have dinner meeting today, and she had lunch meeting yesterday too.

I updated this post on behalf of him.

He wrote it in word yesterday evening as I went home very late.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-22 15:35 发表
autumn trip 比较怪。写school trip 或者 field trip好。

My workmate from US also thinks field trip is better..

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原帖由 fan929 于 2009-10-22 16:54 发表
Good ideas, and when my son has grown up, to participate in

Nice weekend!.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-24 13:07 发表

be going to do sth, autumn/field trip中trip是名词。
We are going to trip next Monday.
We are going to have(take, make) a school(field) trip next Monday.
We are going on a school(field) trip next  ...

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-27 16:49 发表
My Mom picked up me today. I'm very very happy. I hope my Mom can pick up me every day.

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原帖由 香格里拉的春天 于 2009-10-24 21:45 发表
Almost one month already!

One month finally!.

My English is very poor!

Welcome more friends help us, correct our mistakes!

Thank you in advance! .

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there.  And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

Thank you so much!

My 2-year-old daughter enjoys the songs for little kids there. When a song is over, she pushes the replay button by herself, again and again!

Her brother likes many songs also.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-5 13:46 发表
This afternoon, one of my classmates hitted me carelessly, and I fell down in our classroom.

This is better! Thank you! Wini mommy
One of my classmates hit me carelessly and I fell down in the classroom this afternoon..

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-11-6 08:59 发表
carelessly 不对的，我知道你的意思，但是外国人看不懂的。改成by accident 或者 accidentally

Thank you so much!

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原帖由 Wini妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:03 发表
I was hit by one of my classmates and fell down in the classroom this afternoon.
But maybe Andy doesn't understand the passive pattern.

Great!.

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原帖由 Wini妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:09 发表
不二周助说得对的。开始没注意。carelessly 更多是指粗心的那种不当心。

I am so happy that so many kind friends help us!

I do appreciate all of you!.

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原帖由 小车子妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:36 发表
一直在看这个贴，真的写得原来越好了！

Thank you for your encourage!

Let's together!.

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原帖由 Wini妈妈 于 2009-11-6 09:09 发表
不二周助说得对的。开始没注意。carelessly 更多是指粗心的那种不当心。

When I told him that there is a kindly aunt correctted our mistakes on the way to school.He was very happy and he was very interested in the details.

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I think here should be in bed, but he used on bed.

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-11-7 13:32 发表
Good job.

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-11-9 14:35 发表


这里用on 应该是对的。
国外有个儿歌，人人知道的，好像是叫Ten Little Monkeys. 里面翻来覆去就是一样的 One little money's jumping on the bed One fell off and bumped his head...

We did listen this song last year!.

http://new.060s.com/news/mulu/27 ... %20little%20monkeysFive little monkeys!

Here it is!.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-11-19 19:36 发表
There are two swings in children center. There is a slide in children center. But there is not seesaw in children center.

He just learned these words(seesaw/swing/slide) yesterday.

I think here should use in the children center, as the center he mentioned is the children center downstairs..