1楼雪肌精
(微博“失魂落魄的超级战舰—雪雪”)
发表于 2009-4-7 12:26
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Good thing always costs!(by Sunday)
昨天儿子写的作文,教了他用到了时态,有进步!呵呵
What a sunny day today! I went to the Century Park with my families. My grandmother was reading newspapers. My mama was drinking juice. She is very pretty, I love her very much. My papa was sleeping. He is fat and lazy, but I love him, too. I wanted to fly a kite, so I went to buy a kite. I bought a cheap kite first. It's only 5 Yuan. I ran very fast ,but the kite failed to fly. I was unhappy! The next time ,I bought another kite, it's 20 Yuan. OH! It's so expensive! The kite is very pretty and it can fly very high. I was very happy!
I said to my mama, “ Good thing always costs!”.