1楼happyeast
(心情不错)
发表于 2009-6-3 18:34
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这样的英语作文水平怎样啊?
看到某培训机构的材料,上面有篇小学员(朗文中级班)写的英语写作范文,贴上来大家看看,高手来点评一下水平如何:
Beig a daughter
I am a girl of Grade Four. Just like everybody, I have a lot of problems. One of the biggest problems is being a child. I try to be a child, but no matter how hard I try. My parents never seem to be satisfied. They always say you are not good enough. They say I should be a better child. But how to be a better Child in their mind? First, you should eat healthier food. Second, you should get better grade. Third, you should be more polite. At last, my room should be neater. A lot of things are waiting for me to do.
In a word, it is so difficult to be a child.
我找到了大约五六处错误吧,小孩子能写成这样当然已经很不容易了,但作为宣传材料上的范文,大约是经过老师修改的吧?.