看到某培训机构的材料，上面有篇小学员（朗文中级班）写的英语写作范文，贴上来大家看看，高手来点评一下水平如何：

Beig a daughter
I am a girl of Grade Four. Just like everybody, I have a lot of problems. One of the biggest problems is being a child. I try to be a child, but no matter how hard I try. My parents never seem to be satisfied. They always say you are not good enough. They say I should be a better child. But how to be a better Child in their mind? First, you should eat healthier food. Second, you should get better grade. Third, you should be more polite. At last, my room should be neater. A lot of things are waiting for me to do.
In a word, it is so difficult to be a child.
我找到了大约五六处错误吧，小孩子能写成这样当然已经很不容易了，但作为宣传材料上的范文，大约是经过老师修改的吧？.

多谢指教，选择题做得是多了点，毛病养成了，虽然那时候都是这么学的，也应该与时俱进了。
我也说了，孩子写成这样是不错了，然而这是范文，应该是老师修改过的。 那么：
First, you... Second, you... Third, you...和 At last, my room在一起，这老师都不知道让孩子改，误人子弟了吧？
现在的孩子学外语，自己身边的事情都不会表达，这应该跟选择题无关。比如a girl of Grade Four.四年级学生可以说fourth grader，有几个四年级的学生知道呢？有几个四年级的老师会这样告诉学生呢？高中的学生有几个会说I am a high school senior呢？ 大多数都说 I am a senior three student 吧？！.

赞同！现在的大学生好多也是离开第一第二第三就不会写作文了，最后还要用一个Last but not least才罢。.