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[求助] 女儿写的英语想象作文请大家点评

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文法和句子还需多多修炼。
建议加强阅读。
On Sunday morning ,there were three supermen met in the street.The sky is so blue that it looks like a big blue  precious stone.  
开头可以这样:
One Sunday morning, three supermen met in the street. The sky is as blue as a big precious stone. While they were enjoying the nice weather,.......

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