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(在这里随手写下你现在的心情)
发表于 2009-10-30 19:51
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她写英语小作文也没搞懂,考试卷上要求写In the park,她写It`s very nice day today.I with my father and mother go to the park. The park is very big ,we in the park play basketball and football . I`m reading a book under the tree,My mother and father are eating the food on the grass. The flowers are on the grass. we are very happy.
老师修改了两句,I go to the park with my father and mother . We play basketball and football in the park.我知道她用了中文思路写的,但我不知道怎么跟她讲解。.