为什么从小学作文都要一个条条框框，First Second Third呢？这种连接词是要学的，但不是每篇文章都要用的。

写作文不是这样训练的。

写作应该分部教。描写人物的，描写地点的，写过程，写信，写读书报告等等。

[ 本帖最后由 不二周助 于 2009-6-4 09:33 编辑 ].

看一下现在五年级的本地学生，针对性学习“写故事开头”的段落。

Michael went into the dusty garage, under the dim light, something small was under the web. Was it a human or a ghost? He couldn't tell because he's scared of looking at it. So he went back and found his best friend Mina. Together they stepped into the garage again and because Mina is really brave so she leaned close to the item and found it's a baby! From now on, the life of Michael changed...

觉得这样的故事开头是很吸引人的。.