关于英语写作的学习，我研究了下，可以和大家交流。

过程大致如下：

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3. Paragrahs and Description

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Instruction writing

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Persuasive letters

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Comparison

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Notes and Announcements

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Report writing

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Writing a review.

Writing a speech.

Writing a playscript.

明天继续。to be continued

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以上非成人写作，是标准的孩子的课程。

一般来说在国外是从小学二年级开始接触这些类型的，教的手段可以多种多样，绝对不会枯燥。比如Instruction是小学两年级开始学，Persuasive是小学三年级开始。比较大量地是从6-7年级开始，很系统地精益求精地写。我选了一部分必学的，接下来还有什么写自传之类，我就不研究了。.

谢谢分享，看你儿子的Literacy，我估计你们是英制的小学教育，英国或澳大利亚吧。

要和国际接轨，就要学以上的写作内容，我会再总结每种写作的要点的。.

引用:

原帖由 PATTISON 于 2008-8-18 11:35 发表
我们在英国学的IB课程。

IB对英语的要求还是比较高的。

不管是英国还是美国，以上这些写作训练都是最基本的，肯定要学的。记得我女儿的老师说过：英语读到最后，好不好就是一篇文章。
其实语文又何尝不是呢？.

最近很忙，有空了再贴上来。

学这些是很必要的，只有了解并会写这些形式的文章，才能适应出国读书后的大量地写。

就算不出国，能用词精确地写出水平较高的英语，对将来大有好处，毕竟这是全世界人的普通话。个人认为，专业英语学起来很快的，口语和听力也会很快的，前提是要有好的阅读和写作能力为基础。小学，初中是最好的开始学习写作的阶段。.

Model of Instruction writing

How to make a pancake

First, put 2 cups flour, some milk and a beaten egg into the bowl.
Then, use a spoon to stir it for about 5 minutes until there is no lumps you can see.
After that, use ladle to pour mixture into the frying pan slowly.
Next, cook the pancake for 1 minute then toss it.
Finally, add a little bit of jam on and eat the pancake. How Yummy![/color]

作者：我女儿。年龄：二年级。这是一篇比较简单地写制作过程。要素基本都有了，过程还是清楚的。

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Model of persuasive letter

I have read a fantastic book that I would like to recommand to all the girls. Why do I say it is fantastic and just for girls?
First and most important, the story is perfect. It is about a little unicorn lost in the terrible enchanted forest and how Maddie, Sabastain and the other friends helped to find unicorn's parents and the herd.
Second, the book is written by a famous author Carol Barton who always likes to write stories about girls.
Third, the illustration is very attractive and so girlish. The pages are filled with pinky sparkling pictures. EVERYTHING IS PINK. The unicorn is so cute that made you feel want to have a ride on it.
At last, no matter what kind of girls you are, you may find a character in the book is like you, brave girls, clever girls or beautiful girls...
It is a wonderful book and worth reading，isn't it? IT IS UNICORN WISHES!

作者：我女儿 年龄：三年级
If you try to persuade readers, you need to arrange your reasons in order of their importance. The writer (my daughter）chose to begin with the most persuasive point: the story is perfect. and she ends with the least important point: you may find a character in the book is like you.
Another effective way of using the importance is to save the most persuasive for last.

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Model of Comparison

The beach holiday has changed. In the past, travelling is very expensive so only very wealthy family can afford to go to have a beach holiday. Nowadays, we can easily travel by areoplanes. It won't take too long to go to the beach and it won't be that expensive. Wearing long sleeve clothes to cover your skin used to be a regular dressing for women and men in olden days even when you were on the beach. People were embarrassing to see other's skin because of the religion. But now we wear swimming suit made of light fabric, it is quite ok to wear as less as you can.
Like beach holiday of the past, some beach games are still remaining. Digging sand and making sandcastle is a non- stopping fun game for every single kid in both olden days and nowadays.

作者：我女儿 年龄：五年级
这是一篇比较古代和现在沙滩度假的文章，按老师的要求，用Alternating Pattern写的。将事物的一个特征先列出来，马上与另一事物比较；接着再写第二个特征。也就是不同点先比，最后一段写共同点。

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Model of Notes and Announcement

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写过的，很早写的，我找不到了。

老师主要是让她描写超市里的嘈杂声音，不是写超市里的一件事。她写的提纲在下面你参考下。

Supermarket is always busy.
People are shouting.
Trolley are crashing.
Baby is crying.
Children are running and laughing.
Mummy is blaming.
Tilts are beeping.
Music is on......

要写出比较好的文章，首先要大量地阅读，一定要阅读原版书或者引进版，因为英语包含太多的西方文化，看多了才会了解其文化，从而帮助孩子获得英文思维，提高词汇量。这种词汇量不是背出来的单词，而是运用单词。阅读仅仅是积累和基础，要让孩子无师自通还是有相当的难度的。教写作方面，如何分段大小写，范文分析，各种形式的文章要点特点，形容词的使用等等太多了，都需要由老师点拨的。

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