我觉得很棒, 回去再让我家宝宝拜读一下,写一下读"读后感"给FRANK.

昨天我家宝宝说看得太累,今天就有打印版了,发现两个小的语法错误:" she said that she could let his stupid little tooth came out of his mouth"和 "for one of his tooth would came out of his mouth by Max's stout fist. " came 好象应该改成come ,总的来说,写得不错!继续努力.