The best Superman

   
One Sunday morning, three supermen met in the street. The sky is as blue as a big precious stone. While  they were enjoying the nice weather.

Sunddely,a superman said,'l'm very brave.l can carry any things.No one can flatten me l'm a hero!

Then one of them said,'l don't think so l'm a hero!'

'Oh! l can hear someone is shouting!' The third superman shouted .He flew up quickly in the sky .     
Oh!The  a partment took frie!                                                                                                      
There's a conflagration!My God! That's too dangerous!'The  first superman said.

'You are a poltroon! l'm greater than you.'The second superman said.

'Well.You? Greater than me?That's not true! Hmm ,You are a slob!'The first superman said.

The third superman saw there 's a little girl in the apartment.she was very worried and upset.'l'm coming!' The The third superman said.He pulled her hands and took her out.Then they were in the street.

     'Thank you.'The little girl said.

     'You are welcome.Bye-Bye!'The third superman waved his hand.

     The first superman and the second superman still  agreetd .But no one listened to them. Because     they wanted to talked with the real hero------the third superman.

     As you can see,the heroes never says "l'm hero".And the brawler always are not hero.

[ 本帖最后由 美为 于 2006-10-31 17:43 编辑 ].

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因为本人英语水平有限，二十六个字母都认识，凑在一块认识的也有限，所以请大家点评一下。.

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Adventure of Alice 1
Alice was a little girl,she lives in Pudong. she had a lively fancy.Her friend always called her"the fantast".
One day ,Alice walked alone in the street.Sunddely,the branches waved in the wind.She was light in the
head.From then on,she could see a man.The man took her to a secret house.There were many fearful
photos in the house.Then the man faded away.Alce was very woried ,"Where aml? Mummy Mummy!     Help me!"
"you mum isn't here.now listen! stay at home quietly.l  will come back soon!'said a voice,'oh,l' m
hungry.cook some fish for me!'
'He's a piggish man!' she said angrily.Then Alice found a secret room. she was very pleased.she swept     the floor carefully and fouud a secret door. she opened the door.
'Hello! welcome to ZEROK l'm the leader  May l know your name?'Alice could see an old man.
She said loudly,'my name is Alice! And Where am l?'
'well. Alice,good name. Hmm......you are on ZEROK The leader said.
'ZEROK?'
'Yes! ZEROK is a special country. lt's very big! There are eight milions and one people!Alice ...let me see......Oh,so good! you can live on ZEROK ! 'Alice was happy.

[ 本帖最后由 美为 于 2006-10-31 17:01 编辑 ].

她喜欢看书阅读，乱写一通。.

非常感谢！.

不知道该给她买什么样的书，适合她的外语读物。

[ 本帖最后由 美为 于 2006-11-1 11:58 编辑 ].

是小学五年级。.

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Adventure of Alice2--the war
The leader gave Alice a lot of money, Alice made a fridend on ZEROK,His name was Wade. Wade was a Naval officer He could know many pieces of in  for mations one day,Wade said with a smile to Alice ,"Do you know why you can live ZEROK?
"l don't know',Alice shook her head.
"Because there's a war on ZEROK Bob, Cabell, Danny,Eads,Frank Gage Harry,lna and lamar were in for the wars,Long long ago ,the Sprist said 'lf ten people's name is Alice, Bob, cabell,Danny,Ead, Frank,Gage,     Harry ,lna and Dolllars to nineteen people Nine peope 'we will win!'lna said Lamar, they can salvtion ZEROK!' and yourname is Alice.'you must in join the war!'
'OK,'Alice said sunddely,Alice was in the sea she swam and swam,she could saw an is land
'Hello,l 'm Alice!' Alice said
'Oh Alice! Let,s go to the forest!' The nine people said.
They went into the forest.
'Hey!Stupit!We are here!'Dolllars shouted.
Ninty monsters went out.
'Don't be afraid,Alice.Here 's a knif.Throw it.'Harry said quietly.
Alice threw the knif.They won!

[ 本帖最后由 美为 于 2006-11-4 20:21 编辑 ].