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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 10:56 标题: Ducky's Plan

女儿三年级的作业。发来试试。

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:04

Once upon a time, there lived four friends. Their names were Ducky, Piggyly, Birdie and Chickiety. Ducky was a nice, thoughtful and helpful duck. Piggyly was lazy, fat and fast. Piggyly was also the world's fastest pig.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:05

Birdie was very nice, but she was also really shy. Chickiety was a bossy, picky but sensitive chicken. These four friends always met each other at Chickiety's chicken coop during the morning.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:05

The chicken coop was full of eggs. It was a warm cozzy place. Everyone got in the chicken coop. Ducky, Birdie and Piggyly waited for the Chicken Check.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:27

The Chicken Check insured that everyone was in a good condition for a chicken. "Ducky," started Chickiety, "What, it already started?" Ducky shouted in surprise. "Yep, it already started.".

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:31

Chickiety said, "And you forgot to dry your feathers Ducky" "Sorry,", Ducky said. He forgot that Chickiety was a chicken, not a duck. Chickens didn't like water.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:38

Ducky reached for a leaf on the ground. Ducky used the leaf to dry himself. "Piggyly," said Chickiety, "There is no getting my chicken coop messy!" "Sorry," Piggyly said falling asleep.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:43

"WAKE UP!" shouted chickiety to Piggyly. Piggyly snored. SNORE! "WAKE UP!" shouted Chickiety again. Piggly woke up. "We will have a talk about behaving in the chicken coop!" Shouted Chickiety.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 11:45

未完待续。。.

作者: 马甲的马甲 时间: 2011-8-10 13:46

好阔耐牙：）.

作者: 珠珠的妈妈 时间: 2011-8-10 16:55

三年级的孩子？真棒！.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 20:06 标题: 回复 10#马甲的马甲的帖子

Google了一下才猜出啥意思，这网络语言

还得用网络来解，谢谢啊！.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-10 20:07 标题: 回复 11#珠珠的妈妈的帖子

谢谢！我也是觉得她这份作业图文并茂，故事也能自圆其说，就收藏起来了。

一张张慢慢发来，一共34页呢。

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:21

The talk begined. It was too boring to hear. It was so boring that Ducky started daydreaming and Piggly started sleeping.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:22

The talk was finally finished and Birdie, Ducky, and Piggyly went to Ducky's pond. They didn't come to the pond too often.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:24

"Come on!" started Ducky, "Let's go in the pond", Ducky said cheerfully. Ducky went to the deep end. Birdie went to the shallow end, and Piggyly stayed on shore.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:25

Meanwhile at the chicken coop, Chickiety was dry cleaning her house. Piggyly got the chicken coop messy. Ducky got it wet and Birdie had an accident so there was bird poo in Chickiety's chicken coop.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:27

"Next time we will meet outside the chicken coop. " said Chickiety to herself. Behind the chicken coop, there was Catsed. Catsed was the biggest, meanest cat ever.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:29

Catsed looked like a nice friendly and cute cat, but he was the opposite inside. Catset wanted to scare Chickiety and chase her into the deep dark forest.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:30

"No more meetings!" Catset said in his mind. Now Catsed broke the chicken coop by kicking hard. Chickiety was startled by Catsed.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 04:31

Catsed now chased Chickiety until she ran into the deep dark forest. Catsed was happy:"Time to destroy the chicken coop!"

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作者: 马甲的马甲 时间: 2011-8-11 10:38 标题: 回复 12#lemonade 的帖子

打印出来给家里幼儿园的小妹妹看，美丽的绘本，孩子心意相通一定比成人的好.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-11 23:37 标题: 回复 22#马甲的马甲的帖子

小妹妹看了怎么说来说一声哦。.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:04

At the pond, Ducky and Birdie just came out the calm, beautiful and wet pond. Ducky and Birdie now dried themselves and expected Piggyly to be sleeping. Piggly was sleeping.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:10

“I knew it!” Cucky and birdie said together. "WAKE UP!" Ducky and Birdie shouted at the same time. Piggly woke up. "How about we go to the trees?"

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:12

Ducky suggested. "Sure!" Piggyly and Birdie said. When they were walking, Piggyly took a wrong turn and walked to a dirty, muddy, murky pigsty.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:14

"Home at last!" Piggyly shouted. Ducky and Birdie were still walking to the trees until they stopped between the broken chicken coop and the forest.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:16

They knew something strange happened. "Look at Catset." Ducky began, "Chickiety is not in the chicken coop and Catset is destroying the chicken coop!"

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:19

"Do I hear Chickiety shouting help in the forest?" Birdie asked. "Yes," Ducky said, "I think that Catsed chased Chickiety into the forest."

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 00:20

"HELP!" sqeaked Chickiety louder than she ever did. Birdie and Ducky ran to the pigsty.

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作者: 旺旺她爸 时间: 2011-8-12 05:58

测试。.

作者: 旺旺她爸 时间: 2011-8-12 06:03

再试。.

作者: 旺旺她爸 时间: 2011-8-12 06:04

问题解决了。.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-12 06:23 标题: 回复 33#旺旺她爸的帖子

谢谢！.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:32

They called Piggyly, "Piggyly, Piggyly," Ducky and Birdie called, "We need to make a plan to get Chickiety out of the forest." Ducky said to Piggyly.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:32

They started thinking of a plan. They thought of the same thing. Ducky spoke about his plan first.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:42

"Birdie can get a bird's eye view and fly to where she sees Chickiety and fly down to tell her all about what's going to happen..."

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:43

"... and I can ride on Piggyly and Piggyly is going to run until he sees Chickiety and you, Birdie. Both you and Chickiety will come on Piggyly's back..."

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:45

"...and you, PIggyly, are going to ride all of us to the broken chicken coop." Ducky said, "Farmer James and his wife, Jane, caught Catsed and now Catsed is not allowed to go outside."

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:46

"Okay!" Birdie said, "We know all of that!" Birdie said, madly. "Time to take action! " Birdie said. Birdie flew up for a bird's eye view.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:48

She flew until she saw the forest. Birdie now needed to fly near Chickiety. Birdie found Chickiety. "I'm done." Birdie started. "Let's move on to step 2."

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:49

Birdie shouted. Ducky and Piggyly heard Birdie. Ducky jumped on Piggyly. "GO AS FAST AS YOU CAN!" Ducky shouted to Piggyly. Piggly took off like a rocket.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:50

Ducky fell off Piggyly's back. Luckily, Ducky grabbed Piggyly's tail so he didn't fall on the ground. After 5 seconds, Piggyly found Chickiety in front of them.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:51

"Chickiety, come on Piggyly's back." Birdie said to Chickiety. Chickiety jumped on. Piggyly now ran and ran until they reached the broken chicken coop.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:52

They all saw Catsed in the farmer's big brick house. "Let's fix this chicken coop!" shouted Chickiety.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 07:53

The friends fixed the chicken coop and played games like Piggy back. The friends played till it was dinner time and lived happily ever after. Well, until Catsed escaped.

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作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-17 08:20

The End.

Teacher's comments.

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作者: 微波 时间: 2011-8-18 14:34

很有意思的作业。
不过，请问这个小孩会中文吗？能尝试用中文绘图和写作吗？.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-18 19:53 标题: 回复 48楼微波的帖子

唉，提起中文我就冒烟，这两天正跟她冷战呢，还是为了中文。眼看暑假就要结束了，给她布置的任务一半都没完成，默字默不出。惩罚都用尽了，没收了她的所有电子玩具。怎么办呢！

画画没问题，但我估计一换成中文，她的思维要慢兩拍。

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作者: 胖番茄 时间: 2011-8-19 11:38

哦，原来这孩子是英文的母语啊.

作者: 微波 时间: 2011-8-22 23:24 标题: 回复 49楼lemonade 的帖子

呵呵，我很想看到她的中文日记，但始终打不开这个网址。
遗憾.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-22 23:58

看不到2楼的回复？.

作者: 旺旺她爸 时间: 2011-8-23 00:13 标题: 回复 1楼lemonade 的帖子

我帮你修复了一下主题，不知道能不能解决问题。.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-23 02:06 标题: 回复 51楼微波的帖子

试试这个？

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作者: 微波 时间: 2011-8-23 22:10

已经看过了。
如果从三年级的角度来说，在中国的小学生也有一些像这样子的，不过，上面你的感觉很对，她的思维是英语的，只能在一些地方引导她想象，刺激她的用词和表达。她的中文词汇量也是不足的。.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-23 23:58 标题: 回复 55楼微波的帖子

谢谢你！我记得你是语文老师？你的建议非常好。词汇量是个大问题，以致我平时跟她说话，特别是教育她时，用到书面化一点的用词，就不得不用英语，比方她不理解‘诚实’、‘勤奋’、‘尊敬’这样的用词，更不要说成语了。我为她想想中文也真是难！不过她还是很努力的，跟外婆说话一直用中文描述，有的用得很有趣，有次她想说等饭凉一点了再吃，说成等饭“凉快”了一点再吃，我听了觉得用得很可爱！想跟外婆说草地上的蚱蜢，憋了半天说成“草地跳”-- 直接就从英文‘grasshopper’ 翻过来了。.

作者: 微波 时间: 2011-8-25 15:36

"草地跳"这个词语还是很不错的。很有意思。
对了，还有个建议，你可以把我写的小猫哈里的故事读给她听听。
如果能对她的词汇有益就好了。呵呵，自我推荐一下.

作者: 微波 时间: 2011-8-30 10:46

几天未见，最近很忙吗？
很希望看到你记录的关于你女儿学习汉语的种种小故事，像56楼那样的“草地跳”.

作者: lemonade 时间: 2011-8-31 00:16 标题: 回复 58楼微波的帖子

好的，我留心记下来。这几日忙着参选旺爸的管委会呢

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