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作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-9-29 19:36 标题: Andy study English

I'm Andy,I'm a boy,I'm 8,I'm tall,I'm fit,I can swim.

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作者: zhujinhua 时间: 2009-9-29 20:21 标题: 回复 1#冰城来的男孩子的帖子

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-9-29 21:10 标题: 回复 2#zhujinhua 的帖子

Thank you!

I think he should use Andy learns English as title, but he likes the word study.

That's OK.

And I am not sure if fit is suitable or not here.

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作者: zhujinhua 时间: 2009-9-29 21:20 标题: 回复 3#冰城来客的帖子

这是他自己写的文章吗？好有才

不过妈妈也很有才，居然用英文来写帖子。

我实在应付不了

作者: sandyshang 时间: 2009-9-29 21:25 标题: 回复 3#冰城来客的帖子

A very good boy! Going on!

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-9-30 10:02 标题: 回复 5#sandyshang 的帖子

Thank you very much for your kindly encourage!

作者: sandyshang 时间: 2009-9-30 10:17 标题: 回复 6#冰城来客的帖子

You are welcome! Waiting for more!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-9-30 19:08

My Daddy is thin, my Mommy is fat, but I'm strong and fit.

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作者: sandyshang 时间: 2009-9-30 19:31

Your son makes me laugh..

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-1 12:43

This morning, I watch TV with my Mom and Dad at home.

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-1 13:29 标题: 回复 9#sandyshang 的帖子

He said Mom need more excerise!.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-1 20:26

I have a younger sister, she is fat, but she is very cute. ,

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-1 22:08 标题: 回复 10#冰城来的男孩子的帖子

The lazy boy thinks words Mummy and Daddy are too long, so he use Mum and Dad instead of Mommy and Daddy!

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作者: mikishen 时间: 2009-10-2 05:32

how old are u?.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-2 07:39

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原帖由 mikishen 于 2009-10-2 05:32 发表 $\"\"$
how old are u?

8, Pls see 1st floor.

His English is soso, just for fun and practice.

作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-2 08:48

先让他知道大小写和标点符号。Mum Dad要大写。I have a younger sister后面要句号句掉， My Dad is thin也要句号。英文的习惯和中文不同，没有那么多逗号的。
还有，说妈妈，妹妹fat是不礼貌的，有贬义的意思。
继续努力.

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-2 11:20

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-2 08:48 发表 $\"\"$
先让他知道大小写和标点符号。Mum Dad要大写。I have a younger sister后面要句号句掉， My Dad is thin也要句号。英文的习惯和中文不同，没有那么多逗号的。
还有，说妈妈，妹妹fat是不礼貌的，有贬义的意思。
继 ...

Thank you very much!

Welcome more comments!

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作者: MARK妈眯 时间: 2009-10-2 11:22 标题: 回复 1#冰城来的男孩子的帖子

study 的语法是否要注意单数的用法啊？同样 The lazy boy thinks instead of think.

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-2 11:27 标题: 回复 18#MARK妈眯的帖子

Agree! Thank you!

Welcome more comments!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-2 11:47 标题: Oriental Green Boat

Today, I go to Oriental Green Boat with my Mum and Dad..

作者: 龚二 时间: 2009-10-2 12:36

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-9-29 21:10 发表 $\"\"$
Thank you!

I think he should use Andy learns English as title, but he likes the word study.

That's OK.

And I am not sure if fit is suitable or not in here.

in here.

作者: MARK妈眯 时间: 2009-10-2 13:01 标题: 回复 16#不二周助的帖子

呵呵，刚刚学，估计只知道fat，没有更多的词汇啦。.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-2 18:21

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原帖由龚二于 2009-10-2 12:36 发表 $\"\"$

in here

My Chinglish!

Welcome more comments!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-2 20:38

Today, I'm very tired. The Oriental Green Boat is very big.

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作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-3 09:39

This is a good hotel, the room is nice.

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作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-3 20:52

建议多阅读，将来写作词汇就丰富了，也能摆脱中式英语的思维。
先把and, so, but, because串起来写一段。
I went to the Oriental Green Boat with Mum and Dad today. It was a great fun but I was very tired at the end. So I came back to the hotel to rest. I love this hotel because the room is very nice..

作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-3 21:00

I am a boy named Andy. I am tall and fit because I like swimming. But my mum and sister don't do sports so they are not as stronge as me..

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-3 21:31

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-3 20:52 发表 $\"\"$
建议多阅读，将来写作词汇就丰富了，也能摆脱中式英语的思维。
先把and, so, but, because串起来写一段。
I went to the Oriental Green Boat with Mum and Dad today. It was a great fun but I was very tired a ...

Same as Chinese. Reading is very important.

Are there any books recommend to him?

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-4 10:57

Today is Sunday, it's sunny!

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作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-4 10:58

The Oriental Green Boat is very beautiful, but it is very far.

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-4 19:26

看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-4 20:10

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-4 19:26 发表 $\"\"$
看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。

Thank you very much for your encourage and professional comments!

Welcome more!

This also confused me, I saw many sight spots use Oriental Land, but actually he copied Oriental Green Boat from the envelope in the hotel..

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-4 20:37 标题: 6 pairs of socks

Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, 3 for me.

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作者: zhujinhua 时间: 2009-10-5 01:57

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-5 14:54 标题: 4 books

Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-5 16:31 标题: 回复 32#冰城来客的帖子

You are welcome. In fact, I am a layperson. The Oriental Green Boat reminds me the yacht in Huangpu river. It results from the confused official translation. Therefore I like the phrases such as "jiayou".
Andy, jiayou!.

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-5 16:57

继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。.

作者: 小小来妈妈 时间: 2009-10-5 17:52

旺旺上牛孩可真多啊，我们现在连话都说不利索啊，你们居然能用英文写了

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-5 17:58 标题: Shanghai Science & Technology Museum

Yesterday afternoon, we went to Shanghi S&T Museum.

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作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-5 18:05 标题: Windmill

Yesterday afternoon, I bought a windmill for my sister, she was very happy.

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-5 18:08

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表 $\"\"$
继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。 ...

Thank you so much for your comments.

I will remind him.

I do learn a lot here.

Thanks again!.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-5 18:08

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原帖由 小小来妈妈 于 2009-10-5 17:52 发表 $\"\"$
旺旺上牛孩可真多啊，我们现在连话都说不利索啊，你们居然能用英文写了

His English is really soso.

Believe me.

This post is just for practice typing..

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-6 09:23

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-5 16:57 发表 $\"\"$
续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。...

He read your suggestions very carefully yesterday, he thinks your suggestions are very reasonable.

Flowers! Catch!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-6 09:49

An apple a day keeps the doctor away..

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-6 09:57

My favourite fruit is watermelon.
My Mom's favourite fruit is pear.

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-6 10:15

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 09:57 发表 $\"\"$
My favourite fruit is watermelon.
My Mom's favourite fruit is pear.

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear.

作者: luo妈妈 时间: 2009-10-6 10:58

Mum thinks that pear is better for our health..

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-6 17:00

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 10:15 发表 $\"\"$

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear.

Thank you! Your suggestion helps a lot!

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-6 17:24

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原帖由 luo妈妈 于 2009-10-6 10:58 发表 $\"\"$
Mum thinks that pear is better for our health.

Good point! Thank you!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-6 19:43 标题: SJTU-----Shanghai Jiao Tong University

Yesterday morning, I went to SJTU. It's big and nice.

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作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-6 19:56 标题: Table tennis

Today, I went to play table tennis with my Mom. It's funny..

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-6 20:04

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-6 17:00 发表 $\"\"$

Thank you! Your suggestion helps a lot!

I am interested in this topic because it is more significant than others..

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-6 20:09

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 19:43 发表 $\"\"$
Yesterday morning, I went to SJTU. It's big and nice.

My husband graduated from SJTU in 2001. Would you like to be his schoolfellow in the future?.

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-6 21:15

Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there. And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.htm.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-6 22:12

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表 $\"\"$
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there. And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

Great!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-7 09:13 标题: Favourite fruit

My Dad's favourite fruit is yellow kiwi fruit. What's your favourite fruit?

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-7 11:48

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 20:09 发表 $\"\"$

My husband graduated from SJTU in 2001. Would you like to be his schoolfellow in the future?

His Grandma and Grandpa graduated from SJTU too. Currently he has not much idea about university.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-7 13:51

Today is Wednesday. It's October 7th. It's windy. I can't play badminton at downstairs. It's a pity!

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-7 16:31

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-7 09:13 发表 $\"\"$
My Dad's favourite fruit is yellow kiwi fruit. What's your favourite fruit?

My favourite fruit is grape..

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-7 16:37

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-7 13:51 发表 $\"\"$
Today is Wednesday. It's October 7th. It's windy. I can't play badminton at downstairs. It's a pity!

What a pity it is.
The holiday will be end. I am preparing for lessons today..

作者: 龚二 时间: 2009-10-7 18:44

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表 $\"\"$
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there. And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

很不错，谢谢！

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-8 09:34

I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk either.

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-8 11:33

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-8 09:34 发表 $\"\"$
I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk too.

I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk either.
I like neither mineral water nor bean milk.

I like mineral water. And I like bean milk too.
I like both mineral water and bean milk..

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-8 13:33

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-8 11:33 发表 $\"\"$

I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk either.
I like neither mineral water nor bean milk.

I like mineral water. And I like bean milk too.
I like both mineral water and bean mil ...

Thank you so much for correcting him in time.

either和too都可以当"也"讲,前者用在否定句中,后者用在肯定句中.

Lily likes fruit. I like fruit, too. 莉莉喜欢水果，我也是。
Lily doesn't like fruit. I don't like fruit,either.
莉莉不喜欢水果，我也不喜欢。.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-8 13:55

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-7 16:31 发表 $\"\"$

My favourite fruit is grape.

My sister's favourite fruit is grape too..

作者: jiaqimm 时间: 2009-10-9 11:02

The boy is very lovely..

作者: jiaqimm 时间: 2009-10-9 11:11

Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there. And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.htm

Thank you! very good..

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-9 13:51 标题: starfall

Andy likes this website too. Here is the link:

http://www.starfall.com/.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-9 20:03

Today, I went to swim after school..

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-9 20:55

Yesterday, I played table tennis with my Dad. We plan to play table tennis once a week..

作者: Jasmine爸爸妈妈 时间: 2009-10-9 21:29

这个小朋友活动到满丰富的呢！

作者: Jasmine爸爸妈妈 时间: 2009-10-9 22:52

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-6 21:15 发表 $\"\"$
Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there. And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.h ...

Thank you for sharing!

作者: Jasmine爸爸妈妈 时间: 2009-10-10 08:56

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-9 13:51 发表 $\"\"$
Andy likes this website too. Here is the link:

http://www.starfall.com/

不错呢！

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-10 17:16

I will go to play chess after dinner. I love play chess..

作者: 阳光妞妞 时间: 2009-10-10 21:51

很棒啊。继续努力。.

作者: Jasmine爸爸妈妈 时间: 2009-10-11 09:50

运动型阳光少年？.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-11 11:43

Today, my elder sister cousin will come my home..

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-11 13:49

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-9 20:55 发表 $\"\"$
Yesterday, I played table tennis with my Dad. We plan to play table tennis once a week.

Who is the best player among your parents and you?.

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-11 13:51

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-10 17:16 发表 $\"\"$
I will go to play chess after dinner. I love play chess.

It is said that you are good at playing go.

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-11 13:59

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-11 11:43 发表 $\"\"$
Today, my elder sister cousin will come my home.

用"come to"替代"come"?.

作者: ANDY-MM 时间: 2009-10-11 15:17

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:59 发表 $\"\"$

用"come to"替代"come"?

Maybe "visit" is better here..

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-11 20:07

Today, my Dad bought a pair of new sports shoes for me.

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作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-12 10:13

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:49 发表 $\"\"$

Who is the best player among your parents and you?

We are all poor at this sports.

(I am not sure if I should express like this.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-12 10:18

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原帖由 ANDY-MM 于 2009-10-11 15:17 发表 $\"\"$

Maybe "visit" is better here.

I did think maybe visit is better here, but his cousin will stay at my home for more than two weeks.

Welcome more comments!

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-12 10:24

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:59 发表 $\"\"$

用"come to"替代"come"?

I also confusing on this.

Many years ago, my English teacher told us that no need Prep. before home. Like go home, drive home etc. But I don't know why. Maybe I misremember it.

Welcome more comments!

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-12 11:12

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-11 13:51 发表 $\"\"$

It is said that you are good at playing go.

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-12 20:01

This morning, I went to school by myself..

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-12 20:49

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-12 10:24 发表 $\"\"$

I also confusing on this.

Many years ago, my English teacher told us that no need Prep. before home. Like go home, drive home etc. But I don't know why. Maybe I misremember it.
...

When home is adverb, there is no preposition between verb and home, ie "go home".
My home is noun, and go is intransitive verb, so use "go to my home"?.

作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-12 20:51

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-12 20:01 发表 $\"\"$
This morning, I went to school by myself.

Andy is a courageous and self-sustaining boy.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-13 09:35

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-12 20:49 发表 $\"\"$

When home is adverb, there is no preposition between verb and home, ie "go home".
My home is noun, and go is intransitive verb, so use "go to my home"?

Thank you very much!

Agree with you!

作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-13 12:55

越写越好了。.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-13 14:31

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-13 12:55 发表 $\"\"$
越写越好了。

Thank you so much for your kindly encourage!

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-13 19:29

Today is Tuesday. It's cool outside.

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作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-14 08:07

几年级？.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-14 10:20

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-14 08:07 发表 $\"\"$
几年级？

作者: 冰城来的男孩子 时间: 2009-10-14 19:58 标题: Visit bread factory, Taste Hamburger & DIY Sandwich

I plan to visit bread factory this Saturday.

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作者: loveningning 时间: 2009-10-14 20:36

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-14 19:58 发表 $\"\"$
I plan to visit bread factory this Saturday.

It will be a wonderful weekend..

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-15 10:23

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原帖由 loveningning 于 2009-10-14 20:36 发表 $\"\"$

It will be a wonderful weekend.

He organizes this activity; there will be over 10 classmates join it. It will be a crazy weekend!

He said they are all expecting very much!

And I am his assistant only.

作者: 不二周助 时间: 2009-10-15 10:58

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-7 09:13 发表 $\"\"$
My Dad's favourite fruit is yellow kiwi fruit. What's your favourite fruit?

这个不叫Yellow kiwi fruit.外国超市里写着 Kiwi Fruit Gold.加油！.

作者: 冰城来客 时间: 2009-10-15 11:01

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原帖由 不二周助 于 2009-10-15 10:58 发表 $\"\"$

这个不叫Yellow kiwi fruit.外国超市里写着 Kiwi Fruit Gold.加油！

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