再来一篇英文的。但我不知道她写的怎么样，好多句子，从语法上我也不知道对不对。请动英文写作的人，给提些意见。
It’s me
I am a girl, at nine years old. I’m tall and slim, I am always very happy every day, I have
so many things to do because they are very interesting things. My favorite animal is swal-
low, because it can sing beautiful songs, it can talk to me. My favorite flower is jasmine.
It smells very good. Its leaves are green. I like to watch television. I also like sport very
much. I jog, and I skip rope, I’m very active.
This is me. I think I’m outgoing. But you can think I’m shy. This is me. This is myself.. 作者: 小龙女妈 时间: 2007-2-1 09:17
先别说好，我就是觉得有些句子很别扭，比如第一句I am a girl, at nine years old.
我觉得没有这么写年龄的，但人家一口咬定是对得，我也糊涂了，难道我都是CHINESE ENGLISH.所以想问问大家，那些句子是没有这种说法的。. 作者: yahu 时间: 2007-2-1 17:11 标题: 回复婉若妈妈 问一声好！但愿对你家闺女有所帮助
I am a nine years old girl. I am tall and slim and I am always very happy every day.I have many things to do because they are very interesting. My favorit pet is swallow because it can sing beautiful songs and it can talk to me. My favorite flower is jasmine. It smells very good and its leaves are green.I like watching television. I also like sport very much. I like jogging and skipping rope.You can see I’m a active girl.This is me. I think I’m outgoing, but you may think I’m shy. This is me.. 作者: 婉若妈妈 时间: 2007-2-1 17:35
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，相信女孩子的英语将来会非常的出色！