1楼培培妈妈
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发表于 2013-6-25 21:24
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二年级儿子第一次写英语作文，求指导！
Today is a happy day. I with grandma and grandpa go to Oriental land. First we bought three ticket in the ticket offce, and rental a bicycle in the bicycle rental and I let grandpa to ride with me and grandma sit in the middle.we ride aroud the Maidenhiar tree road north and I finde fun bridge and I sad to grandma:"Can we stop?"grandma said:Yes you can, but we can't stay lang."So, I push the brake, and we got of the bicycle and walk to one of the fun bridge.I go first, it is very easy to cross it, and grandpa come, at last, grandma come. and we went to peer bridge, but I can't stand, I must crawl.And we go to the cutting bridge, I can't crawl on these bridge so I muster up courage and stand on the bridge.Because cross these bridge is easy, I use two minutes to cross these bridge and I walk on steel bridge. whan I across it, grandma said to me:"We must go now, because we only have two hours, and we must ride back to one door to return it!" So we got on the bicycle.when we ride a l a bit of road, I finde hero's road and I walk in the first road.The first road is very small, so I bent over the small road. when I parst the small road, a big mountain appear in frout of me, I climb the mountain, I think I had climb three mountains to the end..
