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[外语] Good thing always costs!(by Sunday)

Good thing always costs!(by Sunday)

昨天儿子写的作文,教了他用到了时态,有进步!呵呵
What a sunny day today! I went to the Century Park with my families. My grandmother was reading newspapers. My mama was drinking juice. She is very pretty, I love her very much. My papa was sleeping. He is fat and lazy, but I love him, too. I  wanted to fly a kite, so  I went to buy a kite.  I bought a cheap kite first. It's only 5 Yuan. I ran very fast ,but the kite failed to fly. I was unhappy! The next time ,I bought another kite, it's 20 Yuan.  OH! It's so expensive! The kite is very pretty and it can fly very high. I was very happy!

I said to my mama, “ Good thing always costs!”.

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不错!孩子几年级拉?.

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回复 3#一阵清风 的帖子

3年级了,刚开始写小短文 ,以后每周都会写写,希望有进步..

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写的不错啊,赞一个.

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