先猛赞一个,不是一般的好,是超好,What a super girl!
如果再做些细微改动，是否更好？
1.＂His name is Roald Dahl. Roald Dahl is a very talented writer in 19th century.＂改为＂His name is Roald Dahl，a very talented writer in 19th century＂用个同位语，以便演讲时念起来可以抑扬顿挫些．2.＂ I believe I am one of Roald Dahl's biggest fans, as I have read a lot of his books＂改为＂Haveing read a lot of his books,I become one biggest fan of Roald Dahl's .3."Most children begin Primary school at five or even just before, "改为＂."Most children begin their Primary school life at the age of five or even younger,"(或干脆改为Most children go to Primary school from the age of five or even younger,)
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