看到标题时，以为是家长写亲子日记，没想到是小朋友。
Andy is a wonderful boy.
By the way, the Oriental Green Boat should be Oriental Land.
一些景点和建筑，有其固有的英文名。.

You are welcome. In fact, I am a layperson. The Oriental Green Boat reminds me the yacht in Huangpu river. It results from the confused official translation. Therefore I like the phrases such as  "jiayou".
Andy, jiayou!.

继续关注。
Today, we bought 6 pairs of socks. 3 for my younger sister, and 3 for me.
Today, we bought four books. One for my sister, and the rest for me.
买袜子和书的是we，用me替代myself可能更合适。如果是I买的，则可用myself。
Andy和妹妹分配所有的袜子和书，两者之间有关联，可用and作为连词。
关于标点符号的使用，前面已经有人提到。.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 09:57 发表
My favourite fruit is watermelon.
My Mom's favourite fruit is pear.

I think (that) watermelon is sweeter than pear..

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-6 17:00 发表


Thank you! Your suggestion helps a lot!

I am interested in this topic because it is more significant than others..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-6 19:43 发表
Yesterday morning, I went to SJTU. It's big and nice.

My husband graduated from SJTU in 2001. Would you like to be his schoolfellow in the future?.

Recommend a website to Andy's mother. I found it this morning. My four-year-old daughter enjoys the songs there.  And there are many stories.
The address is http://www.britishcouncil.org/kids-songs.htm.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-7 09:13 发表
My Dad's favourite fruit is yellow kiwi fruit. What's your favourite fruit?

My favourite fruit is grape..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-7 13:51 发表
Today is Wednesday. It's October 7th. It's windy. I can't play badminton at downstairs. It's a pity!

What a pity it is.
The holiday will be end. I am preparing for lessons today..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-8 09:34 发表
I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk too.

I don't like mineral water. And I don't like bean milk either.
I like neither mineral water nor bean milk.

I like mineral water. And I like bean milk too.
I like both mineral water and bean milk..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-9 20:55 发表
Yesterday, I played table tennis with my Dad. We plan to play table tennis once a week.

Who is the best player among your parents and you?.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-10 17:16 发表
I will go to play chess after dinner. I love play chess.

It is said that you are good at playing go..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-11 11:43 发表
Today, my elder sister cousin will come my home.

用"come to"替代"come"?.

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原帖由 冰城来客 于 2009-10-12 10:24 发表



I also confusing on this.

Many years ago, my English teacher told us that no need Prep. before home. Like go home, drive home etc. But I don't know why. Maybe I misremember it.
...

When home is adverb, there is no preposition between verb and home, ie "go home".
My home is noun, and go is intransitive verb, so use "go to my home"?.

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-12 20:01 发表
This morning, I went to school by myself.

Andy is a courageous and self-sustaining boy..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-14 19:58 发表
I plan to visit  bread factory this Saturday.

It will be a wonderful weekend..

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原帖由 冰城来的男孩子 于 2009-10-22 13:44 发表
We are going to autumn trip next  Monday.

be going to do sth, autumn/field trip中trip是名词。
We are going to trip next Monday.
We are going to have(take, make) a school(field) trip next Monday.
We are going on a school(field) trip next Monday..

Good job..