12楼邴老师初中英语
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发表于 2012-10-14 13:08
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初一作文讲义的内容
作文,讲明白只是一个开始,重要的是多借鉴,多实践,多总结。
中考的要求
1)使用正确的时态
2)使用恰当的词语
3)要有清晰的思路
4)要有不同的句子
5)要有一定的连接
连接词(框架)
As we all know … ; It is known to all that…; It is commonly acknowledged that…
After that, Later on, … Last, …
连接词(过渡)
what’s more, in addition, additionally, More importantly; 表示递进
in fact, as a matter of fact, actually, particularly 表示承接
as a result, 表示结果
for example, in other words, 表示列举
on one hand…on the other hand, compared with… 表示对比
to one’s (great ) joy/ surprise , sadly, hurriedly…; surprisingly; 表示反应
连接词(结尾)
in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned, As for me; 表示想法
anyway, needless to say, 表示强调
generally speaking; in general; in conclusion 表示总结
in a word, in short, in brief; on the whole; 表示结论
Example Articles
Topic 1 Our Last Class Meeting ( things )
1. Our Class Meeting was taken place last Sunday. We invited many teachers. We gave a lot of performances. Such as sing, dance. Our teacher gave photos to us. She spoke something. We said goodbye. We had a good time. We had a great day. We remember the day.
2. Our class meeting was held last Sunday. We invited many teachers to our meeting. We gave a lot of performances, such as singing and dancing. Our class teacher spoke at the meeting. She also took a lot of photos of us. We had a good time. We will always remember the last class meeting.
3. Our class meeting was held last Sunday. We invited many teachers to our meeting. First we gave a lot of performances, such as singing and dancing. Then our class teacher spoke at the meeting. What’s more, she also took a lot of photos of us. On the whole, we had a good time. Needless to say, we will always remember the last class meeting.
4. Last week we had our class meeting. All our teachers joined us in the meeting. Our monitor first talked about our study and life at school and thanked the teachers for their kind help and good care. Then our class teacher made a speech. He hoped that we would keep studying hard. After that we gave each other presents. We sang and danced together until late in the afternoon. We all had a wonderful time and agreed that it was really an unforgettable class meeting.
Topic 2 My… ( people )
1. Mr Li teaches us geography. He is tall and thin. Though Mr Li is in his fifties, he is still very active. He likes travelling very much and often shows us the photos of many historical interests he took during his trips. He has a great knowledge in geography, and it makes his lessons very interesting. Most of us are fond of his lessons, because they let us know the world better. Besides, he is always friendly and kind to us all. In a word, Mr Lee is my favorite teacher.
Topic 3 The Great Wall ( place )
1. As we all know, the Great Wall is located in North China. It is 6,700 kilometers long and thus known as the “10,000-li Great Wall”. The building of the wall went on for more than 2,000 years, from 700 BC to 1,400 AD. Thousands of people lost their lives while building it. As one of the seven wonders in the world, the Great Wall was used to protect the Chinese nation from the enemies in history. It is our pride and shows the wisdom of the Chinese people.
Topic 4 Shanghai ( place )
1. Thanks to the open-door policy, Shanghai is developing faster and faster. As a Shanghainese, my dream is to become a lovely citizen. I should neither talk loudly in public places nor cross the road when the traffic light is red. As we all know, Shanghai has won the bid to hold the 2010 World Expo. Needless to say, I will do everything possible to tell the world that Shanghainese are lovely.
Topic 5 My dream ( idea and thought )
1. My dream is to be a woman president. Perhaps you’ll think that I must be mad, and being a woman president in China is even more difficult than flying into the sky without wings. However, I want to say it is just a big ambition. I have a dream to be a woman president because I want to show that a woman can do the things that a man can do. No matter whether my dream will come true or not, I will try my best to do everything because nothing is impossible.
1. No matter what you do, I will be on your side. = I will support you.
2. No matter where you go, I will follow you.
3. No matter how difficult the task is, I will never give up..