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秀秀女儿的中文和英文习作

先来一篇中文的，是学校里的练习，给了一幅图片，一对北极熊母子在寂静的晚上。让孩子自己发挥想象写一篇文章。


母  爱
在这幽静的森林里，月光照着，星星闪着。一对北极熊母女在寂静的夜里享受着无限的温情。
小北极熊对妈妈说：“妈妈，我还饿呢! ”妈妈温柔的说：“孩子，先睡觉吧，一早就给你弄吃的。”小北极熊听了，就闭上了它明亮的小眼睛，趴在妈妈的怀里，进入了甜甜的梦乡。
寂静的夜已经过去了，一个明亮的早晨开始了，小北极熊一吃完东西，就蹦蹦跳跳地出去玩了。转眼间，又到了晚上，小北极熊伸了个懒腰，埋头又是一觉。
当母女俩都睡着时，脸上露出甜美的笑容，多么幸福的一家啊！

[[i] 本帖最后由 婉若妈妈 于 2007-2-1 09:54 编辑 [/i]].

再来一篇英文的。但我不知道她写的怎么样，好多句子，从语法上我也不知道对不对。请动英文写作的人，给提些意见。
  It’s   me
I am a girl, at nine years old. I’m tall and slim, I am always very happy every day, I have
so many things to do because they are very interesting things. My favorite animal is swal-
low, because it can sing beautiful songs, it can talk to me. My favorite flower is jasmine.   
It smells very good. Its leaves are green. I like to watch television. I also like sport very
much. I jog, and I skip rope, I’m very active.
This is me. I think I’m outgoing. But you can think I’m shy. This is me. This is myself..

强的，3年级？.

[em08].

写得真好[em21].

很棒!.

回复 #3小龙女妈 的帖子

今年小二。.

才小二啊，真不得了.

很美的文章!.

先别说好，我就是觉得有些句子很别扭，比如第一句I am a girl, at nine years old.
我觉得没有这么写年龄的，但人家一口咬定是对得，我也糊涂了，难道我都是CHINESE ENGLISH.所以想问问大家，那些句子是没有这种说法的。.

回复婉若妈妈 问一声好！但愿对你家闺女有所帮助

I am a nine years old girl. I am tall and slim and I am always very happy every day.I have many things to do because they are very interesting. My favorit pet is swallow because it can sing beautiful songs and it can talk to me. My favorite flower is jasmine. It smells very good and its leaves are green.I like watching television. I also like sport very much. I like jogging and skipping rope.You can see I’m a active girl.This is me. I think I’m outgoing, but you may think I’m shy. This is me..

哇，行家一出手，就是不一样，谢谢指点，我那点英文水平一到写作上就连女儿都败给她。看到你的修改，才知道文章当中粗糙的地方。我把你的修改打印回去，给女儿看看。谢谢！.

回复 #12婉若妈妈 的帖子

能在一起有一次课程交流也算是孩子们的幸福，学习是共同的。
写作方面我不会是行家，我只是保证语法方面不出现明显的错误，对原文内容不进行改动，褒奖了[em01] ，相信女孩子的英语将来会非常的出色！[em21].

婉若妈妈,婉若写得真好哎!特别是那篇中文习作,好美.
回去让薇薇学习学习..